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The Seventh Realm Part 2 - The Ten Realms Series Book 9

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Strength comes not in victories. It comes from standing up after defeats, in reaching out a hand and pulling others to their feet. Of pushing others ahead of one’s self.

Alvans must dig deep. They have paid a heavy price, a price felt in the hearts of every member.

They started, a small group fighting to just survive in the first realm to a nation that challenged the combined United Sect Alliance.

Instead of crumbling they bared their teeth, they fought forces from the seventh realm. They bled their enemy every step of the way.

Beaten but unbroken. Each member of Alva has been tempered with elements, has cultivated their mana. Now their minds, their spirits have been tempered and tested and they must cultivate their belief in one another.

For there is no option for them. There is no other path ahead of them.

Erik and Rugrat have groomed a nation from that small group. As they created that spark, it has now grown into something they realize they shouldn’t control.

Strength, is knowing what one can and can’t do. Its about putting ones beliefs on the line, and making that line in the dirt and saying, beaten and broken, standing together and raising up others and saying through bloodied teeth.

This we’ll defend, this we’ll give our lives for. For even if they are to die. Their deaths will protect the others behind them, they will use their bodies to push others behind them forward, even if only a centimeter.

Today Alva might be broken, but tomorrow they will stand, stronger than before, to prove those that made the ultimate sacrifice, that given that extra centimeter they will claw their way forward a meter.

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FoolishExpectations
Great Story - But Jumbled Presentation

Good news, less dross and filler in plot line. Not so great news, some backsliding at the grammar-sentence level -- such that readers are occasionally left to reason out what the author probably meant to say. This includes occasionally incomplete dialog and scrambling or not indicating who said what. The worst news is increasing numbers of event conflicts, like dead now alive, and timeline scrambles. It's quite apparent that several interludes were cut and pasted in the wrong chronologically order. In several cases alternate versions of events from the same viewpoint are pasted back to back. Unfortunately only a fraction of these conflicts can generously be attributed to seeing events from another viewpoint through the fog of war.

The author could greatly improve long series by keeping better storyline notes (log of written events and secret author guidelines) for major group or key character. Plus short cliff notes on regular support cast, you know important things like when killed and last mentioned location or duty and power level. Because several got tombstone and body bagged... But after the battle they were fine.

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Kichara
The Alvan Tradition of Terrorism

Lots of killing non-combatants in this one. Lots of blowing up workers. They seem fine with killing anyone who isn’t Contracted to die when they break Alvan Law. Maybe the Alvan contract kills off their empathy for non-citizens?

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Amazon Customer
Pretty decent read

I enjoyed the book but still doesn't have the page turning of the first three. We'll see if that ever returns.

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Wardell Emery
Page turner

Just as good as the rest of the series, and kept me enraptured through every page. i was around 100 pages left in the book yesterday, and managed to find the ending coming too close too soon! i enjoyed the book and look forward to the rest of the series and future works to read!

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John henry
Strong Characterization, weak mechanics.

Characterization is the core of story telling, and the foundation is strong. A well delineated and vibrant cast of diverse characters keeps things interesting despite the (many) mechanical mistakes.

The errors range from the almost cliche It's so common mistake of introducing solutions and then realizing you liked the problem, in *exactly* the most common and predictable ways.
look this resource replaces rest! wow super amazing. later ***except for when it would be more convenient for the plot for characters to feel tired.

Magical healing fixes your broken a$$! Except when we need the tired old plot device of long term injury etc.

Still as I said at the start, the foundation is strong enough to support a few tired tropes, solid 4 stars.