Fernix - Harmony War Series Book 4

A great series and I'm looking forward to the next one

So many misspellings, wrong names, missing words, and syntax errors that pulled me from the story. I had to re read certain sentences to try to figure out what the author was trying to say. This didn’t happen in any other bold and I’m surprised to see so many mistakes in this one.

So far I really enjoy the series. The story following Mark, Tyler, Jerome and Alexis is really good. Can sit down to read for a few minutes only to realize 2 hours has slipped by.

I'd give it a higher rating but it also feels like the books were rushed to publication. In every book I've read so far I've found more punctuation, grammar and spelling errors than I could count. Most are minor things but enough to annoy me as I'm constantly finding errors (and I'm by no means an English major).

I do like the book series and would love to continue reading it, but I had to stop. English is my second language and if I find lot of grammatical and punctuation errors... Please have somebody with good English skills proof read the books and fix all the glaring errors!

I rated this four stars, though I believe this is the best of the Harmony series thus far. I reserve Five star ratings for works that I believe will become classics. That said this tale actually does have moments of brilliance, and, again I greatly enjoy the characters and storyline.