New Horizons - Emerilia Series Book 4

Brilliant, fantastic editing, fun and engaging read. Perfect balance of humor, action, technical specifications and a splash of romance. Bravo!!!

This book seemed to be edited in a strange way compared to the last 3. This caused large blank spaces on many pages.

This book can be slow, but it follows along Michael Chatfields style of writing by being better than the previous, and I expect the next book to be as good or better than this one. (Some aspects of the book are hamhanded, but I appreciate the meat of the story.)

This is basically the same criticism I had for the previous book. This is more of the same. I am interested in these characters and their story, and I absolutely love the premise, but with our a consistent source of tension I almost want to just skip the next book to see if they've gotten to the good part yet.

There is one major raid in this book, but I never got the feeling that they would lose. It ends up just being pure progress, they do the thing, they get the stuff, hurray they won, etc. It gets boring, and the interpersonal developments aren't enough to carry the story through, because it's not that kind of story.

I'm going to stick it out for the next book, but I might be dropping the series after that.

My biggest gripe is that this book (and the ones before it) seems as if it had not been proofread.