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  1. I like all except for bleeder, because it sounds more like a horror book. And the title unshackled would grab my attention the most. Good luck!

  2. I always think of the first book in a series as the name.
    Like with harmony war I think sacremon, that is why the trapped mind project reallly suits as the first.
    Unshackled would be good for the second book because of his advancement in magic. It is as if he has been unshackled.

    But hay that’s what I think, but over all. Everything you wright is amazing.

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